Kim Basinger

"A medical expert has commented that Kim Basinger is aging beautifully, largely attributing it to a healthy lifestyle, but also suggested she may have undergone some cosmetic treatments. This expert pointed to the possibility of anti-wrinkle injectables like Botox to address crow's feet and dermal fillers to smooth lines around her mouth, based on comparisons to previous photos."
(((sigh)))
The German who edited Hitler's speeches was the world’s first grammar Nazi.
Grammar nazis think the world should speak the way you do. You are, almost universally, narcissists and jingoists.
Also, this is not a legal document, scientific paper, or some other crucial piece of writing: who cares about their grammar? Expecting 'perfect grammar' (which doesn't exist) in a situation such as this is like wearing a tux to go grocery shopping. Get real; get appropriate; you are out of touch.
Besides, other than what looks to be a typo (ie and), it's pretty well written, in conventional terms.