Joan Van Ark

"Formerly a prominent figure in soap operas like Dallas and Knots Landing, Joan Van Ark's appearance has been significantly impacted by numerous plastic surgery procedures. Reports indicate she underwent treatments such as Botox, laser therapy, facelifts, brow lifts, cheek implants, and dermal fillers. The cumulative and reportedly excessive nature of these interventions has rendered her once-celebrated features nearly unrecognizable."
(((sigh)))
The German who edited Hitler's speeches was the world’s first grammar Nazi.
Grammar nazis think the world should speak the way you do. You are, almost universally, narcissists and jingoists.
Also, this is not a legal document, scientific paper, or some other crucial piece of writing: who cares about their grammar? Expecting 'perfect grammar' (which doesn't exist) in a situation such as this is like wearing a tux to go grocery shopping. Get real; get appropriate; you are out of touch.
Besides, other than what looks to be a typo (ie and), it's pretty well written, in conventional terms.