Mickey Rourke

"Mickey Rourke has confirmed undergoing facial surgery, attributing many procedures to repairing boxing injuries and stating, "Most of it was to mend the mess of my face because of the boxing but I went to the wrong guy to put my face back together." He has detailed having five operations on his nose, one on a smashed cheekbone, and cartilage taken from his ear to rebuild his nose. Despite these admissions, many experts believe Rourke has undergone additional cosmetic operations beyond those he has publicly discussed."
(((sigh)))
The German who edited Hitler's speeches was the world’s first grammar Nazi.
Grammar nazis think the world should speak the way you do. You are, almost universally, narcissists and jingoists.
Also, this is not a legal document, scientific paper, or some other crucial piece of writing: who cares about their grammar? Expecting 'perfect grammar' (which doesn't exist) in a situation such as this is like wearing a tux to go grocery shopping. Get real; get appropriate; you are out of touch.
Besides, other than what looks to be a typo (ie and), it's pretty well written, in conventional terms.