Tori Spelling

"Tori Spelling openly acknowledges having undergone plastic surgery but clarifies that the extent of work done is not as extensive as many believe. She has faced public speculation about cosmetic procedures since she was 17, a persistent rumor her father, Aaron Spelling, once dismissed. This scrutiny regarding her appearance has been a long-standing aspect of her career."
(((sigh)))
The German who edited Hitler's speeches was the world’s first grammar Nazi.
Grammar nazis think the world should speak the way you do. You are, almost universally, narcissists and jingoists.
Also, this is not a legal document, scientific paper, or some other crucial piece of writing: who cares about their grammar? Expecting 'perfect grammar' (which doesn't exist) in a situation such as this is like wearing a tux to go grocery shopping. Get real; get appropriate; you are out of touch.
Besides, other than what looks to be a typo (ie and), it's pretty well written, in conventional terms.