Zac Efron

"Zac Efron's noticeably wider jaw and stockier facial features in 2021 prompted fan speculation, with some jokingly referring to a "chad filter." Efron attributed his changed look to a nasty fall in 2013 that "shattered his jaw," though he appeared with his previous look in films for years after that incident. Hollywood plastic surgeon Dr. Gary Motykie expressed skepticism about Efron's explanation, suggesting the dramatic transformation might be due to cosmetic surgeries and the use of muscle-building drugs."
(((sigh)))
The German who edited Hitler's speeches was the world’s first grammar Nazi.
Grammar nazis think the world should speak the way you do. You are, almost universally, narcissists and jingoists.
Also, this is not a legal document, scientific paper, or some other crucial piece of writing: who cares about their grammar? Expecting 'perfect grammar' (which doesn't exist) in a situation such as this is like wearing a tux to go grocery shopping. Get real; get appropriate; you are out of touch.
Besides, other than what looks to be a typo (ie and), it's pretty well written, in conventional terms.