Joan Rivers

"The late Joan Rivers candidly acknowledged her extensive history with plastic surgery, confirming procedures like facelifts, neck lifts, and eyelid surgery without apology. While some might have considered her cosmetic work excessive, Rivers herself remained unapologetic about her choices."
(((sigh)))
The German who edited Hitler's speeches was the world’s first grammar Nazi.
Grammar nazis think the world should speak the way you do. You are, almost universally, narcissists and jingoists.
Also, this is not a legal document, scientific paper, or some other crucial piece of writing: who cares about their grammar? Expecting 'perfect grammar' (which doesn't exist) in a situation such as this is like wearing a tux to go grocery shopping. Get real; get appropriate; you are out of touch.
Besides, other than what looks to be a typo (ie and), it's pretty well written, in conventional terms.