Anjelica Huston

"Anjelica Huston has acknowledged taking significant steps to maintain a youthful look, including admitting to the use of collagen injections. However, she also revealed that a negative experience with a Botox experiment made her hesitant about certain other surgical procedures."
(((sigh)))
The German who edited Hitler's speeches was the world’s first grammar Nazi.
Grammar nazis think the world should speak the way you do. You are, almost universally, narcissists and jingoists.
Also, this is not a legal document, scientific paper, or some other crucial piece of writing: who cares about their grammar? Expecting 'perfect grammar' (which doesn't exist) in a situation such as this is like wearing a tux to go grocery shopping. Get real; get appropriate; you are out of touch.
Besides, other than what looks to be a typo (ie and), it's pretty well written, in conventional terms.