Donatella Versace

"Significant alterations to Donatella Versace's face are evident, particularly her remarkably taut and smooth skin, which could indicate a facelift. Her fuller cheeks might be the outcome of either cheek implants or dermal filler injections. There is also speculation that procedures like lip augmentation have contributed to her current look."
(((sigh)))
The German who edited Hitler's speeches was the world’s first grammar Nazi.
Grammar nazis think the world should speak the way you do. You are, almost universally, narcissists and jingoists.
Also, this is not a legal document, scientific paper, or some other crucial piece of writing: who cares about their grammar? Expecting 'perfect grammar' (which doesn't exist) in a situation such as this is like wearing a tux to go grocery shopping. Get real; get appropriate; you are out of touch.
Besides, other than what looks to be a typo (ie and), it's pretty well written, in conventional terms.